Friday, March 11, 2016

Blog 14 Alternate ending

       Alternate ending

       Jonas and Gabriel could not believe their eyes, glowing with bright lights was a village covered in tiny colorful bulbs, lights hanging from each dwelling. Jonas was delighted to see the wonderful lights of the dwellings. When they both looked up, they saw a huge tree covered in bulbs, lights, little pictures of kids who seemed to be a one and a Giant star on the top. Jonas could not believe his eyes!
 “We’re here Gabe” Jonas said in a weak tone.
Jonas then followed the music to a small little area with a box seeming to let out the music. He was about to touch it but then, A sudden loud bang sounded, Jonas fell to the ground with a sudden thud, Gabriel’s wailing seemed to have faded. It was Dark now.

       Jonas woke up with a sudden thud to the chest, 3 men with white coats and a weirdly shaded gray mask where around him. Jonas felt a sharp pain on his back. The men where talking all at once as he tried to move. Jonas knew he could not be alive, he had heard what had happen. Jonas was shot on the back seeming to be a Giant “polar bear” of some sort. He had looked around and heard the sound of roaring outside the small area he was in. But then, Jonas then felt the pain on his back go away, he had seen darkness again. Jonas Heard Gabriel before He went to a total darkness.
       He had heard a familiar voice saying “ Thank you for your…” all of a sudden, the light had blacked out. Later on, heard his name fading as he went into the blinding light.

                                        The community

                  Jonas has been gone for a week before anyone noticed, everyone thought he was with the giver but he had thought that he was with his family, no one had heard about him so it went into a full panic in the community. I had to find the giver and ask him to see if he had known anything about Jonas but he hadn't heard from him. The community went into a panic! Search teams had left the community to search in the elsewhere. I know Jonas Wouldn't leave us but he had, it couldn't be true but it has been 2 weeks after he was known as missing. Everyone was looking around the place seeing if he had fallen and got hurt somewhere. 
                     Soon after, Someone had found Jonas's cloths near the river where no one had searched. I knew he had gone for a little swim in the river but I didn't think he would drown or get hurt. Jonas was a good swimmer and I know it, he even said himself that he could go in water for hours at a time. There where no fragments of Jonas in the river, It could be possible he was injured while in the river. " What if Jonas had gotten injured during swimming and fallen into the purifier?" I said to the Elders " It would be Impossible! Nothing was caught in the purifier except some... oh my" said the chief elder as she said in a sad way " Some fragments of, a uniform" the Elder stood up in shock as they had heard the news of how it was highly possible he had fallen gotten injured. " Cancel  the search, let everyone know there will be a ceremony of loss next month"

                     It has been a month, all searchers are back except for one, it had been stuck in a place unknown to the community and Elders. " Fiona are you ready?" my mom had said " Yes I am, Where is the last search plane? It has been lost for at least a week." I said with a questionable look on my face. " There working on getting a transmission to it." I knew this would take a long time since the plane had gone so far but I know it would come back. 
                We where at the ceremony of loss when it was about to begin when coming out of the speaker was someone who seemed to be exited but worried saying something but it was too blurry for us to understand. Finally we heard the roaring sound of the final search plane, it had been in reach of the transmission radius " We found him, we found Jonas!" We all gasped in surprise 

" Where are you guys? How did you find him?" said the chief of Elders
 " we are far in the cold and we spotted him near a forest with Gabriel, he was freezing to the ground when we came down to take him. Jonas is in a coma but we are working hard to revive him!" I knew that Comas where very deadly and hard to help treat them without the Anpositin shot. Everyone was silent.

                 The plane arrived 2 days later and came out Jonas, and when I looked at him, he looked awfully terrible! He was not going to survive since he hadn't gotten the medication to save him. We continued the Ceremony of loss in the Great auditorium. 

" We will now say a few words of Jonas's life." Said the Chief of Elders with a long sheets of paper. After the story of his life, The Chief then said " We now thank you For your childhood, Jonas"
We then went on "Jonas, Jonas, Jonas" The night grew on as we went on. Jonas was no longer with us.

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